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Kylie, Sabrina, And The Transformation Ray (PDF)

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Woo, it's finally posted! There's so much to talk about but I'll try keeping it as brief as I can. I've had this idea for quite a while now and knew I'd put Kylie and Sabrina at the center of the story. I LOVE how Kylie's personality absolutely shines throughout, since she's so random, goofy, and just weird at times :lol: I had so much fun writing in Kylie's jokes and random statements, but also her and Sabrina going back and forth about something, as well as the various characters we see throughout.

A few months ago I posted a journal looking for some transformation/expansion suggestions from my readers that they enjoyed. I looked at all the comments I got and put in as many as I logically could. I'd say I got most of them, and I got thinking that if I put in every single one then who knows how long the story would end up :lol: To fit in as many as I could, though, I combined some things. Almost all of the transformations within this story are stuff I've never written before, so it was new and fun to write. You may be used to reading about a transformation a certain way, and my goal was to include as much stuff as I could, while also spicing things up a bit. There's some interesting combinations of stuff you don't typically see, so perhaps it'll start “new” combo-fetishes to branch off from this story? Who knows. I just wanted to unleash my inner Kylie and let my brain run wild ;p

There's a bunch of randomness (attribute that to Kylie, of course), and I wanted to acknowledge my readers by trying some new stuff they enjoyed that I hadn't written before. I must say I had quite a blast writing these, and it could lead to more future stories similar in nature ;p I understand I could've gone “further” with some of this stuff, but I opted not to go overboard like I could have. I was focused on the transformations/expansions, but also the dialogue between Sabrina and Kylie. I didn't realize it until towards the end, but the story really was about two best friends just hanging out and doing random stuff with a transformation ray :lol:

Anyway, there's a lot of different things in the story so although you may not like a certain transformation, there's bound to be others that you do enjoy. Thank you to everyone who left a suggestion, and I may not have gotten to write in “every” single one, but I hope you enjoy the other transformations that occurred (again, I checked off so many that there's bound to be at least a few you like!) :highfive: I don't know if I'll ever write a story as long as this again, because it was exhausting :lmao: But in the future I may be inclined to write more about the transformations within this story. I enjoyed giving them a go, and Kylie and Sabrina definitely let me get creative. When I first had this idea I KNEW Kylie would be perfect for it among my OC's, though Kylie and Sabrina make quite the combo, that's for sure! ;p :evillaugh:
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This was so much fun!  I love all of it, especially the honey lol.  I'd love to see someone make a comic from it.  Great job!