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Instead of using my OC's, I gave Brad and I our own little romantic story. If only magic gems were real though, right? 
I really like the concept of wishing or thinking of a command and having it come true, but having one person (or the whole world, for that matter) be completely oblivious to changes is something that I find to be really sexy
It's a good psychological kink, because as the reader you're obviously aware of everything going on, but those in the story have no idea unless someone makes it known. Also, pay attention to the italics and how they're used throughout - towards the end there's a little mix-up As you can see from Brad testing the gem out, he tries a few....interesting commands with it 
A "magical gem" is something simple, but I haven't written a story like this before and wanted to give it a go. I didn't want to write "too" long of a story either, so I tried not to get too carried away with it while also keeping things rather tame. Still though, so much bikini popping!
Perhaps in the future I could give this gem concept another try 
Hope everyone enjoys the story! I know I did Also, how about that ending? 
I really like the concept of wishing or thinking of a command and having it come true, but having one person (or the whole world, for that matter) be completely oblivious to changes is something that I find to be really sexy
It's a good psychological kink, because as the reader you're obviously aware of everything going on, but those in the story have no idea unless someone makes it known. Also, pay attention to the italics and how they're used throughout - towards the end there's a little mix-up As you can see from Brad testing the gem out, he tries a few....interesting commands with it A "magical gem" is something simple, but I haven't written a story like this before and wanted to give it a go. I didn't want to write "too" long of a story either, so I tried not to get too carried away with it while also keeping things rather tame. Still though, so much bikini popping!
Perhaps in the future I could give this gem concept another try Hope everyone enjoys the story! I know I did Also, how about that ending? Mature
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I too am a bit fan of stories where a character is growing but reality is being restructured around them so everyone thinks that it was always that way. I think it's especially fun when the person who's changing is one of the people who's aware of the change, as it allows them to be embarrassed about it while everyone around them is treating it as though it was always that way.
My one critique with this story is just a matter with formatting. The narrative is done in first person from Janelle's POV, even though a significant chunk of the story is from Brad's POV, which makes reading certain parts of the story feel odd.