Ok...finally done with this story....lol. This took forrrevvveerrrrr....like....a few days. Thankfully I finished it, lol

And I think I noticed that the story is kinda slow in the beginning, but as it goes on it gets better, or starts going with the flow. When that happens, I guess that's the start of me getting into "the zone" when I wrote the story, lol. I love using that term ^^

And everything in the story happened when I went on vacation.....except for the blueberry pie, lol. We did have pie for desert, but it wasn't blueberry .....but still, pie!

And I think Jess's mom is really cute, lol. I really do!

I wrote a lot in the past few hours and I'm really tired. It takes a long time writing a story and thinking of what to put in *sigh* so tired.

So don't be surprised if there are some spelling mistakes (which I'm sure there are) lol. I skimmed through and I caught a few mistakes but I'm sure there are more...grrrr....

So anyways, enjoy the story and let me know what ya think! ^^