Here's part one!

Had this idea of making a mini series for Halloween. And what better to get everyone into the Halloween spirit than some expansion?

So yeah. Part one actually took me a few days to write, since it's pretty long. I wrote little bits of it here and there, and finished it today.

What do you think of the characters? Interesting group of friends, huh? Interesting little fact with Carly's character: Does she remind you of anyone maybe? Like possibly an OC of mine? Lol, her name isn't too far off! But yes, Carly's character was actually inspired by my OC, Clara. Just by the way Carly acted was very cute (like Clara) and I just thought that'd be interesting

But other than having a pretty interesting group of characters in this story, their personalities REALLY showed in my opinion. You can tell by the way they spoke, and acted at certain times. I thought it was cute how Carly got scared so easily, lol ^^ . But I'm proud of how that all turned out.

What did you think about the comparison's I made in the story? My favorite was the 'Crash Landing' one . Also loved the 'One step closer to freedom.' (Read the story and you'll know what I'm talking about )

So yeah. I thought this was a cool idea so I wanted to give it a try. And since it's for Halloween, I tried putting in that 'Spooky' feeling in there as well. I thought the Haunted House was a nice touch

Also, there's A LOT of foreshadowing going on, so if you picked that up then please keep that to yourself so others can enjoy the story. Thank you

Also, LOVE the ending of part one. Just thought I'd mention that

(All characters in the story are based purely on my imagination only.)

Hope everyone enjoys the story so far! Part two coming soon!

Happy Halloween! ^^



Here's Part Two: [link]
Here's Part Three: [link]